When Harry met Sally, or John met Marcia, or ….
Oct 31st 2008Karen RoseOn Writing!
There are several Key Moments in a romance novel. The first time the reader meets the hero or heroine is one. Of course the first kiss, the first love scene, (especially the first love scene) are all important too! But when the hero first meets the heroine is a defining Key Moment.
That scene is usually one of the few I have in my mind before I sit down to write the book. The place, the context, the emotional state of both characters – all are critical to establishing the foundation for those characters’ progressing relationship. It sets a tone and a mood, and I can’t write onward until I get that First Meet scene just right.
Sometimes the hero and heroine’s eyes meet and they just know. You know?
The joy in those stories is watching that love blossom and grow from moment one. Then again, sometimes their eyes meet and sparks shoot, swords duel – because they THINK they don’t like each other. Of course WE know differently and part of the fun of those books is watching them come to the conclusion to which we’ve already jumped.
Here are a few of my favorite First Meet scenes from the silver screen and the printed page:![]()
1) Rick and Ilsa in Casablanca meeting in Rick’s bar- of course this is a re-meet, but still right up there
2) Ian and Elizabeth in McNaught’s Almost Heaven – when she comes down the stairs and he can’t quite breathe … Ahhh.![]()
3) Brian and Abby in The Truth About Cats and Dogs – they meet on the phone and he falls in love with her voice. Then later, they have their love scene on the phone – oh baby
4) Daniel and Alex in my own Scream For Me – He’s investigating a day-old murder with ties to a thirteen-year-old murder of a teenager, when the woman murdered thirteen years before walks into his office. For a moment he’s simply stunned, then finds Alex is the murdered girl’s twin. Why she’s there and who both characters are in that moment of time, drive their relationship for the rest of the book.
There are so many others – I could go on all day!
What’s your fave First Meet scene? Do you like it better when they just KNOW from the bat of the first eyelash, or if they have to work at it a little bit? Do you have your personal First Meet story to tell?
This is a picture of my kitchen. You would think that someone with a kitchen like this would be into cooking, but I’m not. I’ve tried, believe me, but I can’t get into it. If meal prep is going to take more than about a minute, I am irritable and surly for the rest of the evening.






























